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I played dramatic trailer music as I uploaded this.

Hooray finally started thissss ^^ I'm actually doing somethiiiing as opposed to just talking about it!

Urgggggh I can't draw treeeessss dfjdfhkgkjd

Which isn't good, since about a third of this comic is going to be in a forest....... guuuuhhh....

and there's so many things wrong with thisss. but considering how much I drew and erased and redrew Larry's face, I'm surprised there were very few sketch marks.

LARRY'S FACE IS SO FAT WHYYYY DX no wait you know what it is? I made the snout too big compared to how I usually do it.

Actually, for some reason this reminds me of :iconaquariasc:'s style... except mine's way worse XD I'm so sorry if that offended you!!

So pretty much since I'm uploading the title page now, given my track record, you can probably expect the first page... in about a year. XD

Nah I'll try to be better than that. Eleven months. Tops.

I guess this can also be considered sort of the first page as well.

Backgrounds are gonna be a pain. this took like 1-2 hours. XD ah well. at least I'll learn something, right?

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Rebecca-47's avatar
I  like the trees. :D This is coming from a person who can't draw trees to save her life.
(and before you try to deny it, let me show you...exhibit A, the "why even bother": rebecca-47.deviantart.com/art/…, and Exhibit B, the "who needs leaves":rebecca-47.deviantart.com/art/…
Anyways.
I also really like the way you drew the guy's face. it looks curious and the irises are shaded nicely. Not sure anout the dude (?) in the foreground though.
Also, I think the first guy's (left. is it Lemmy? I'm calling him Lemmy, for now) left arm is rested at an unnatural angle, you know? I'm not good with arms either, but i think you ought to let it rest closer to his body.
BTW he font looks pretty great...like the breeze above the forest. :D